What Is It All About Poem by Red O'Mara

What Is It All About

Rating: 4.2


I couldn't sleep one night and,
hoping you'd be awake,
poked, and waited,
then found your photograph,
you'll know which one,
and, yearning for you,
traced its soft lines
with the finger of the mouse.
Traced your softly rounded breasts,
their pointed nipples.
Traced your torso beneath that succulence,
and then followed the gentle swell of your belly
to where I paused
and pondered on, wondered at,
what we have,
you and I.
What we have that some believe is everything.
That others, laughing, say is not.
As an ordinary man, I
had never much considered this.
But now, knowing you
and feeling less ordinary,
it seems to me that this,
this ordinary happening,
has given to me most,
perhaps all,
of that which I always assumed might come
with money and achievement
and would complete me.
Pleasure, joy and laughter.
Lust and passion and pain
that ‘hurts so good'.
But, also, offering and taking,
fulfilling, failing, forgiving.
Sharing and caring, and baring
all that we really are.
Loving.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Honeytip 14 December 2012

Ordinary man? Hardly! Your work is beautiful, endearing and unique. You have blessed so many by sharing your art. Thanks Red x

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Stevie Taite 02 December 2012

It is so refreshing to have a man be honest and open about all this! From a woman's point of view, it is heart warming and I am glad this is how you express yourself and allow us to share! Another enjoyable piece! Thanks!

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Owain Glyn 01 December 2012

This is the first of your work that I have read, evocative and 'open' I enjoyed it.

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Lyn Paul 30 November 2012

Red, Again.... BEAUTIFuL. I do get a little embarressed reading some of your work and it makes me laugh and smile for minutes on end. Please keep doing exactly what you are doing. Thank you

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Red O'Mara

Red O'Mara

Melbourne Australia
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