What Is This In Me...... Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

What Is This In Me......

Rating: 3.7


what is this in me
which brings out the beauty in whatever i see
what is this in me
which brings out the friend in whomever i see
what is this in me
which makes this hostile world a home to me
what is this in me
which gives me the strength to forsee a good for me
what is this in me
which keeps me connected to all life i see
what is this in me
which would'nt abandon me for whatever i be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 07 May 2009

The thread of love that binds the divese beads and makes a beautiful garland that is joy for ever. CP

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Barbara Terry 05 May 2009

I agree with Barry and Sandra. What is this in me is the shining light that makes you a decent human being and that if needed you will help where and when you can if you can. That is what is this in me. What is this in me is also the pride it takes to make it through this crummy world with a smile and pride in who you are. That is what is this in me. The light that shines through the heavens for you to follow. A really nice write and a 10+++++. Thank you for shaing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Barry A. Lanier 05 April 2009

a true understanding of the light that shines within...'Keeper and Giver of all Things'

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Miriam Maia Padua 21 January 2009

IT'S LOVE..and LOVE and nothing but LOVE... i love this write..very wonderful.. it gives me a light feeling....REFRESHING to my mind, my heart, and my spirit i will make this as one of my favorites...10++++++

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Coach Roth 15 January 2009

I like to think I'm spiritual, that I do feel and connnect with the energy that binds us...your question is the answer...a beautiful sentiment that the self is stronger by loving all it encounters...Coach

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Patti Masterman 28 September 2009

I love the different levels of existence described in here. Whatever it is, I am glad it is there in you. (smile)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 31 May 2009

You have wonderfully observed yourself from the different points. Very interesting write,10+++

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Sandra Fowler 17 May 2009

You are walking on the sunnyside of life in this one. Very positive.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Ravi A 09 May 2009

It is the radiant light that is within us which is responsible for all these aspects. We call it the eternal spirit, the eternal consciousness, the awareness. All the dimensions of purity reside here and if we miss to feel it out of life, it is only due to our gross nature of mind and nothing else. The thinner is the mind, the more reflective is the radiance of soul.

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rago rago 07 May 2009

very fine write........... thank yu for ur kind sharing.

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