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A Silent Sight

Rating: 5.0
a fleet of birds
in the sky
forming an arrow
cutting across the wind
to reach their destination....
the shape remains the same
the birds keep changing their positions
to avoid exhaustion
what was the instruction?
who was their instructor?
no gathered audience
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Paul Amrod 27 May 2018
Hi Samanyan, The only spiritual presence is that of the birds. If we as humans cannot talk over problems then we are lost, Greetings, Paul
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 November 2009
It’s a very good observation of Nature’s mosaic and well compared with ‘Man-Made’ same. Enjoyed Sir. Ten+ niv. New post Expiry ~ Date or any poem. Please read and comment and…. niv.
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Emu Getachew 31 October 2009
One is divinely orchestrated and the other flocks of birds could be used to destroy divine's beauty. Great comparison.
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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 25 October 2009
Without any formal training, a fleet of bird take an organized flight, reorient themselves to change position.Fighter planes do the same thing under instruction. Apparently their patterns of cruises are very similar, but a lot differs behind.Excellent idea.
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Nalini Hebbar 08 October 2009
manmade vs nature...for me nature wins hands down...regards
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Rebecca Harvey 07 October 2009
i think this poem is amazing the way you can compare something so natural and beautiful like birds to something that can end lives like fighter planes love it like to see lot more of your work!
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Spiritwind Wood 04 October 2009
good poem-gives you something to think about
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Pandian Angelina 04 October 2009
I wonder maybe you flew with the birds and saw the flight of planes! We have seen too but, only after seeing through your poem we actually saw! Angel.
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Patrick A. Martin 29 September 2009
Who is copying who and who instructs the birds
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Antonio Liao 28 September 2009
a plain site of the immortality of our feeling imbued in the reality of time experienced of what is today....like a water, cycle by time to create a beautiful rainbow in the pleasing eyes...' up, up in the sky “...i like the way you pen your poem...God bless....a 10 +++
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