What makes you cry?
I pray it’s not always me
As you have convinced me many times
The real me
Would never try to hurt you
I know you are in pain
And probably hate me.
But you don’t hate me
As much as you miss me
Truth be known
I show more of a tendency
To abandon you to your locked closet
Of whore’s clothes and dildos….
You are predictably stronger
Than most souls
I encounter in the deafening mist of empty dreams
What makes you cry, when I’m not to blame?
2009 © TS
Just the frustrations of existing fruitlessly can make anyone cry especially when desires are unfullfilled.Hope you are feeling better.
LOCKED CLOSET ARE NOT TO ABANDON LOVE BEHIND BUT TO ACCOMPANY LOVE.GREAT WRITE WITH LOGIC. SAQIB
you are the people who are teasing and hurting the world then why do you say i not?
a beautiful poem for some one even if she cry because of you, it is a good sighn that she loves you
i loved this poem...ive often wondered the same...what makes him cry when im not to blame...or..whos to blame when il not...thanks
' I encounter in the deafening mist of empty dreams ' What a beautiful line, Ted. The whole poem is uplifted by this line........A definite 10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I enjoyed this poem; it was extremely emotional. You're a great poet. Thank you for sharing your work.10.