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What's Happening?

Rating: 4.5
what happens to a friendship?
when at first it's like a treasure
but then everything seems so cold
time erases the wishes of future

what happens to promises?
kept in heart? or forgotten?
were they built to break apart?
is it the rule of people's heart?

i don't ask anyone to stay
i don't force anyone to go
but i'm confused when i look back
what's happening? ...i don't know...
Wednesday, April 16, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
why don't we learn not to miss the things which never return...
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COMMENTS
Khairul Ahsan 14 December 2018
@Steven, Thank you for appreciating my comment. I would like to have yours on some of my poems too.
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Khairul Ahsan 22 May 2014
The questions that you have raised in your poem have indeed plagued many hearts before yours, and the answer to your note is yet unknown. i don't ask anyone to stay i don't force anyone to go but i'm confused when i look back what's happening? ...i don't know... - Truly enigmatic! A nice poem, well done!
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steven 14 December 2018
you did great on this one Khairul Ahsan
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Khairul Ahsan 22 May 2014
@Cassandra Jasmine, No matter who ceases the communication, the friendship continues if it is true friendship.
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 19 April 2014
I really agree with this perfect nice piece of work. This truly nice man...i really enjoy it. we, sometimes are kept in such situations that don't know how to act and we get angry so soon...but most of us in fact, don't know lots of things won't never comeback again.... nicely done bro.
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steven 14 December 2018
Hey you did really good on this one, you should establish it, like now.
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Marco Angelo 19 April 2014
this is written well indeed. but it will put the reader in a doubt that what kind of friendship was this and where it was heading? as you have written what's happening? what is happened to friendship? or your friendship? or what? perfetto Matino. :)
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Cassandra Jasmine 18 April 2014
Wow, this was beautiful! Sometimes, I, too, wonder about promises, whether they are remembered or forgotten, and what happens to a friendship when communication ceases. I'm giving this a 10, and adding this to my Favorites List. :)
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