.ur Sadness Is My Sadness.

Rating: 5.0
It's silence.
It's sadness.
Someone is leaving me.
Here becomes a hell without you.
You see the depth of my honesty.

I want you here.
But I can't see you suffer.
Better to go! Yes, Better!
I can't see you under this pressure.

You! My best friend! Tonight you're so sad.
I can't see your tears. They make me really mad.
Whatever happens, if even you go,
I won't forget those happy days we had.

We both know, I hate 'good bye's.
They bring tears in my eyes.
But if leaving helps you forget,
So leave till the bad memory dies.

Whatever happens in this harsh life,
Remember! Forever we are friends.
Captain A & Golden eagle! !
We are the heros of our own legends…


(26.09.2013)
Thursday, September 26, 2013
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i wrote it last night.i was sad...i was thinking seeing ur poems here may suffer u...or you may need to forget this area for sometime...so i desided to tell u, please do whatever that makes u feel better.Ok?
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COMMENTS
Souren Mondal 18 November 2015
Saying goodbye to a friend is always difficult.. It almost always takes a piece out of ourselves.. Thank you for the poem..
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Patricia Grantham 08 October 2013
An emotional write of true friendship. There comes a time when friends will have to part. You will meet again someday and stay focused. Enjoyed your write. A have a poem titled If We Ever Meet Again. Please take a look when you have time.
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Marco Angelo 08 October 2013
wow Christ....what a nice piece of art. ha ha, this really makes a different Mr. Alookh. the friendship is a gold, true friends are like a gem..bright and beautiful...nice and great....bella..monto bella. fine....
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Nader Baheri 07 October 2013
very poignant.the hearts are still for each other.even the distance has filled the gaps~nb
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Unwritten Soul 29 September 2013
If blood is the coins to pay the happiness, i guess we still pay some to taste and understand what it means, but no...even i give all it never be here, i shall surrender all my darkness to everyone till no more dark i have for myself...but will bright come replace them...or emptiness claimed me? ? .......this is what i feel when i read yours, definitely i understand the feeling you have my lil Alookh. Please take care always_Soul
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 27 September 2013
i see the depth love in your depth bro. I lost. But hopes still are. I should say you are a gift from God to this universe to make changes. I think i couldnt, but you still have the chance to see the world for what it is. And your sadness is mine. As your happiness is. As your victory As your love As youself
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Abhishek Mishra 26 September 2013
Nice poem...I would rate it 10/10 : -)
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