What Sorrow Has Befallen Me Comments

Very poignant and powerful love. Heart wrenching. Some thing I expressed in HER SMILE. Beautiful indeed.

Very poignant and moving fine work 10+

What a moving piece of writing Andrew, so sad and poignant. But a marvellous poem with great flow and with sweet words. Great feeling in this one too. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

What a masterpeace you have created here with each and every stanza, shows so many diferent heartaches that you can feel the pain, and wish the reader to want to reach out and comfort you..... Very tender write, and as always, another excellent write..... Bonnie

Such a wistful pensive piece written straight from the heart. The saddest part for me was 'for no one now does seem to care'. You have captured the imagery with such creativity Andrew, as it will linger with me during my day......Karin Anderson

What remarkable melancholy, Andrew...... From heart was going your words flow.... as silvery tears...10x10... Sincerely, Tsira

a very sad poem but written masterfully.... you have great sense of rhyme and rhythms....very well done sir.

To love someone and not be loved in return is tragic, a very sad tale Andy, my heart is broken reading it, you are a master at your craft my friend, 10+++ Lynda xx