Mahfooz Ali

Rookie - 219 Points (28 October / Lucknow (U.P.) India)

What Went Wrong? - Poem by Mahfooz Ali

What Went Wrong?
What did I ever do to you
To make you applause others in front of me?
What did I ever do to you
To make you say dear to others
When you said you would live life with me?
How can you live with yourself?
After sitting down next to me while you knew
I could never have you?
How can you stand yourself?
After smiling at me and then pushing me away?
Because you told me you loved me.
So now I'm alone
With a sad, tearful song.


Comments about What Went Wrong? by Mahfooz Ali

  • (3/22/2007 12:05:00 PM)

    Sad one but a nice one Mahfooz Chhavi (Report)Reply

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  • john tiong chunghoo (3/22/2007 11:19:00 AM)

    wow, what a sad sad sentimental song. good one mahfooz (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 22, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 5, 2011


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