What would happen
if you just let go
and open your heart
completely
What would happen
if in this moment
you would let go
of everything else
the back pack
you carry with you
so heavy with doubt
and pain
from yesterday
What would happen
if you just forgive
What would happen
if you look in a mirror
and see yourself
really, really see yourself
for the first time
empty and innocent
like a child
beautiful and free
Can you tell me
what would happen?
It would be nice to be beautiful and free, but we need life's experiences to enable us to evolve spiritually, and though painful, if we believe in spiritual evolution, then we are each moving forward to an eventual state of enlightenment. Good question though, and very well expressed.
Well! Heavy pain and doubt. Really great idea. I mean it. My doubt is really heavy. Heavier than majority of people. Yet my pain is heavier than my doubt! Un-imaginable! Oh, dear friend, if I see myself empty as a child, then I would think would grow older soon? But when I'm old, I'd think, what'll happen if I grew young. Good poem honey. I'd be glad to see your comments about my poems. Thanks.
What would happen? That is questions with a thousand answers! You would tear down that fence in front of you and would be able to have a full view of the World! Discovering that there is a treasure at the end of the rainbow waiting for you! Your life would become as colorful as that rainbow! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and God Bless You! Romeo-NYC
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I would like to translate this poem
This is very deep, what would happen? Would the heart skip a beat, would tears fall from the sky, would your eyes see through the darK? What would happen if the door to the unknown is opened? Great Ink Kasia! Please see my poem entitled A Rose By Anyother Name -Kelly.