Thursday, April 3, 2008

When April Wakes The Dawn Shall Sing Comments

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When April wakes the dawn shall sing
A graceful chorus sweet and long,
On blossomed boughs the birds shall rest
And fill the air with joyful song.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Duncan Wyllie 12 April 2008

Amazing Andrew, absolutely wonderful lines When sun does shine a ray of light The signs of spring will thus appear, The breeze will blow a warming breath To fill the land with grateful cheer....'WOW! ' Love duncan X

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Ernestine Northover 10 April 2008

Just mention bluebells Andrew and my heart melts, for they are so spectacular as they fill the woods with colour so rich. Lovely write, the spring always inspires us to put pen to paper and shout forth. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Alison Cassidy 04 April 2008

This is charming and melodic Andrew with impeccable rhyme and meter. Your bluebells remind me of Wordsworth's Daffodils. An enchanting introduction to spring. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Thad Wilk 03 April 2008

Great read Andrew! ! And i agree with Frank, totally! ! ! *10*! ! Best regards! ! Friend Thad

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You fleck a dovetailed pictorial...soft 'n smooooothe...Imagwork is key, and you have employed it well, in your offerage of April's metamorposical presentations. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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