Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,692 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

When Time Taught Me - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

When time taught me the quantum of zero and universe
Unto my swings of stance across the wings of tears slashed
Rolling to my dream gracefully high at some weird moments
When my crumbling fear melts down to the mist of smiles.

As I stood with the raved up feelings in mute undertones
Under the shadow of time shuddering to the stress of test
On the lap of my mother’s dream flapping ambiently
to learn a language of living unfettered yet unveiled

as yet I do not. reason out the reason of my will sullen
under the soulful seafaring unfazed as I see fretfully
when all my senses gathered upon for willful nectar
being relished upon the notch of gesture amidst the crowd.

as I stoop upon the sacred image of my god within
To quench all my unconcerned thirst ever empowered
Like crystals sweet smiling falling over my muse innate
Hedging upon the garden around while reading own language.


Comments about When Time Taught Me by Dr subhendu kar

  • Miriam Maia Padua (1/21/2009 9:55:00 PM)

    superb piece..with words so refreshing....comforting
    felt like floating in the clouds of divinity...
    can make one's heart feel the lightness and the feeling of freedom from uncertainties....
    when time taught me....makes my doubts subside...10+++++++
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  • (4/22/2008 1:36:00 PM)

    There is a Heavenly comfort in ones own language.

    GW62
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  • (3/2/2008 8:06:00 AM)

    Hi subhendu, 'when all my senses gathered upon for willful nectar
    being relished upon the notch of gesture amidst the crowd...' _Deep philosophy and fine work... Thanks, Tsira
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  • (11/26/2007 4:07:00 PM)

    Very good poem for sure, totally kept me focused!
    Hugs,
    Linda
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  • (6/26/2007 7:37:00 AM)

    This poem has a lot of meaning in it which really good. I like the way you flowed with your stanzas. GREAT JOB! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 17, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 12, 2011


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