When Time Taught Me Poem by Dr subhendu kar

When Time Taught Me

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When time taught me the quantum of zero and universe
Unto my swings of stance across the wings of tears slashed
Rolling to my dream gracefully high at some weird moments
When my crumbling fear melts down to the mist of smiles.

As I stood with the raved up feelings in mute undertones
Under the shadow of time shuddering to the stress of test
On the lap of my mother’s dream flapping ambiently
to learn a language of living unfettered yet unveiled

as yet I do not. reason out the reason of my will sullen
under the soulful seafaring unfazed as I see fretfully
when all my senses gathered upon for willful nectar
being relished upon the notch of gesture amidst the crowd.

as I stoop upon the sacred image of my god within
To quench all my unconcerned thirst ever empowered
Like crystals sweet smiling falling over my muse innate
Hedging upon the garden around while reading own language.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 21 January 2009

superb piece..with words so refreshing....comforting felt like floating in the clouds of divinity... can make one's heart feel the lightness and the feeling of freedom from uncertainties.... when time taught me....makes my doubts subside...10+++++++

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Greenwolfe 1962 22 April 2008

There is a Heavenly comfort in ones own language. GW62

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Tsira Goge 02 March 2008

Hi subhendu, 'when all my senses gathered upon for willful nectar being relished upon the notch of gesture amidst the crowd...' _Deep philosophy and fine work... Thanks, Tsira

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Linda Weischedel 26 November 2007

Very good poem for sure, totally kept me focused! Hugs, Linda

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Raul Castelan 26 June 2007

This poem has a lot of meaning in it which really good. I like the way you flowed with your stanzas. GREAT JOB! ! !

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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