vanessa feliciano

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When Finally You Awake - Poem by vanessa feliciano

love is great at the beggining
but will you like what awaits
when through the dark
you finally awake?
after the racing heart
the sweaty palms and red faces
when you finally awake
and find your places
will you like what awaits
when finally you both awake?


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  • (12/17/2009 1:59:00 AM)


    Hopefully! Falling in love is the most dangerous emotion to play with. Love and win and your life will begin. Love and loose and you'll suffer the blues. Why do we do it? Life without love is no life at all, that's why.
    Best Regards
    James
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 7, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 12, 2010


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