When I Fell In Love With You Poem by zion anisius

When I Fell In Love With You

Rating: 4.1


When I fell in love with you, I fell in love with your flaws not your perfection.
I fell in love with your personality not for your looks.
I fell in love with your smile, your laugh, but yet I fell deeper in love with your fears, your pain, your moody days and your lost soul.
I fell in love with your humble heart, your silent thoughts and you're never ending talks.
I fell in love with that look in your eyes when you smile, yet found me falling deeper in love with your clandestine tears and your mid night falling apart thoughts.
If I ever looked for perfection in you, truly I would never find the real you.
For everything that is a flaw in you, that is the perfection I see hidden beneath your heart.
Because when I fell in love with you, I fell in love with every inch of you.

Saturday, August 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: him,love and dreams,love and friendship,love and life,soul,thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nafis Shadhin 05 August 2017

true lover. wish you experience a true love. nice writing.

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Zion Anisius 05 August 2017

Thank you it really means alot c: glad you enjoyed

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Rini Shibu 06 August 2017

Wow beautiful poem.. You are a perfect lover Loving the flaws of a person is too hard but if it's true love you can +++10

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Zion Anisius 07 August 2017

thank you very much c: i agree with u c:

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Rajnish Manga 05 August 2017

Lovers seek all good things in their partners but only a few realise that there is nothing like perfection. Beautifully conceptualised here- If I ever looked for perfection in you, truly I would never find the real you. Thanks.

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Navod Dilhara 10 December 2018

Encounters of yours in this filed is clearly figured out. And you have spoken of the true side of the matter you have mentioned. Great!

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Chinedu Dike 14 October 2017

An insightful depiction of love as a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly. Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Ana.

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Messaoud Allalouche 05 September 2017

very nice poem Ana I like it very much

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Messaoud Allalouche 30 August 2017

very nice poem I like it

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 August 2017

Seems marital nature of love. That is great. Thank you very much, Zion.

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