When Seagulls Cried Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

When Seagulls Cried

Rating: 5.0

If only i could go right back,
straight to the very start,
When i was but a tiny child,
We'd never be apart.

We'd walk along the sandy beach,
the waves would crash and fall,
Into the pier where fishermen stood,
Behind the old stone wall.

And in the sky so blue, so clear
we'd hear the seagulls cry,
Oh how we loved to spend our days,
As summer passed us by.

If only i could go right back,
To then, those special days,
Eating ice cream on the beach,
On deckchairs bright and gay.

Alas those moments won't return,
Only in memories,
The finest days I've ever spent,
The best there'll ever be.


Jayne Louise Davies

Saturday, January 13, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: beach,eating
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 17 January 2024

A wonderful poem.. extremely well penned. Top score

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Rebecca Navarre 17 January 2024

Such beautifully beautiful and precious memories! .. Ever so many 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 17 January 2024

Oh! .. What beautiful and wonderful sentiments! ..

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 January 2024

Jayne the beauty of this poem shines through Bravo! ! ! !

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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