When Soft Lies Are Whispered Into The Ears… Poem by indira babbellapati

When Soft Lies Are Whispered Into The Ears…

Rating: 3.0


the sea, the moonlight
the shining sands afar
and the landscape one far
stretching silhouette
you and i
standing in the sit-out
with the horizon beckoning
isn’t that a perfect setting
for all lies to transform into
one eternal truth…?

and your gentle whispers
flowed into my ears as a
cascading moonlight...

i bathed naked...

15jan2010
19.37hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 30 January 2010

wonderful painting of words.... very alive....your words painted it vividly so sweet...and the love within.... very romantic thanks for sharing always... help us grow and find inspirations too so with ideas.... 10+++ Lovelots, Maia

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fine piece.. :) sweet really.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 17 January 2010

a breezy romantic piece which too stands out with realism

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Ranjit Ravindran 16 January 2010

Picturesque...and deceptively romantic!

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 16 January 2010

one big salute. nuthin else. thank you.

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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