When The Last Flock Flies Poem by Mick Zerr

When The Last Flock Flies

Rating: 5.0


The sky is Nature's billboard,
Changing with the seasons.
Begging us to peer skyward
Offering us endless reasons.

Fall is fading, Winter looms ahead.
The birds are fat from endless feeding.
In fields and trees they hastily fed,
Readying for a southern greeting.

Squads of, black and red, rufous and white
Forming 'V's and lines so long;
Honking and squawking, day and night,
Composing a wondrous season song.

With haste the sky will turn its tune
From glorious sounds and singing wings
To winters snows and howling glume,
Leaving us the cold it brings.

Soon the fading V will be out of sight.
We'll be gazing then at empty skies,
Wishing we could have joined the flight,
When the last flock flies.

When The Last Flock Flies
Thursday, January 10, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,seasons
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 13 January 2018

Wintering birds, moved to better climes While others prepared, for wintertime Nature subdued, now in full retreat The hills and vales, browning in defeat Congratulations on your P. O. D. An insightful write on the beauty of fall.

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Ruta Mohapatra 13 January 2018

It is a beautiful poem but I do not understand why all the stanzas have been repeated.

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Tom Allport 13 January 2018

a lovely poem of natures ways and how birds have learnt to count the days to migrate to warmer climes where there is plenty of food to find? .....well penned Mick

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 13 January 2018

Does not this kind of billboard of flock of delightful birds on the sky stir the emotions in the days of fall and winter? Very beautifully composed..........deserves P.O.D......thanks for sharing........10++++++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 January 2018

Mick, such a heartwarming poem... congrats for being chosen....a highest 10+++

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Ravi A 13 January 2018

Nice poem indeed. The concluding lines really lift the spirit of the poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 13 January 2018

Man has learned much. The V formation of the birds, is seen in the aircraft formations of Air Force. A nice poem, congrats.

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Ester Wallis 13 January 2018

A lovely poem that I enjoyed.

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Dina Tidsdale 13 January 2018

Excellent nature poem.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 January 2018

What a beautiful sight in the sky! Nature is awesome. So is this poem. Congratulations Mick!

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Mick Zerr

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Aberdeen, SD
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