When The Light Fills This Darkness Comments

Love the layout of each verse, an unusual rhyming set-up. Very well done, I would think not an easy one to accomplish. Excellent work. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

A sad but gentle approach to this one Andrew, Keep that chin high Love duncan X

A touchingly sad and capturing poem tenderly expressed! ! *10*! ! Thank you for sharing Andy! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad

Aahhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! So sad but beautifully written piece. We all feel the pain of unrequited love. Great read though. love and hugs Ernestine XXX