When You Read My Poem Poem by Raghavan Warrier

When You Read My Poem

Rating: 5.0

Just read the first line of my poem
And if you don’t feel like reading
The lines that follow, then maybe
Bin it; it isn’t worth the trouble.

At the end of poem, if you see
Only me in the poem and not you;
Forget the poem; it is only a soliloquy.

If the poem doesn’t leave a thought
To carry; A line that reverberates
A piece of nature or love for the world;
Trash it; it is only a heap of words.

If you are still persistent, I am afraid
Something is seriously wrong with you.
Get checked by a good psychiatrist.

If you are sane and still want to carry on,
Then use a heavy sledgehammer;
To break the beautiful rhyme that
I cunningly knit into the words to create
All those ripple in the surface;
Also put it to good use to break
The feet thumping in the rhythm of words
Created to cover up my poetic weaknesses.
Please powder all the beautiful words;
Set in the right place
To hide my filthy mind.
Throw the powder in the furnace of truth.
If you see everything going up in smoke,
Then, throw my pen in the furnace.
All the spoken words are not meant to be heard.
It is better to be silent than to be an imposter.

Thufail Ahmed 26 July 2007

Oh my God! You create magic and.................................

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Risha : Ahmed 28 January 2007

This is a very lovely one.

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June30 Tara 27 December 2006

I really loved and enjoyed your poem... Tara

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John Tiong Chunghoo 19 December 2006

and yes, i love it too.rag,

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 18 December 2006

Tis true, Raghaven, that impostered existence, is worthless, & it is also true that a poem that is languished versus what the poet is capable of, is not of good merit. However, a well expressed piece on this topic, with a spot-on statement of validity, as as displayed in earnest by this work of yours....well that deserves merit & kudos, for a job well done...'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F j R

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