M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 163,883 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Where Are You, My Beloved? - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Are you in that little paradise,
where my childhood is still playing hide and seek
waiting for butterflies to arrive
a kite to fall from sky and run with urchin to catch
and you cheering from behind to go get it….

Or hanging in the same garden
where the shrine of virtue has been placed in your honour,
and upon which you offer my heart and soul as sacrifice?
to become larger than life and obey world’s norms.

The darkness has swallowed the bright lights
Turning night to show the last moon light
And you are hiding somewhere behind the stars
Before the dawn breaks, let you and me share it again.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Where Are You, My Beloved? by M. Asim Nehal

  • Dimitrios Galanis (1/12/2016 10:05:00 AM)


    Running as waters the rythm and the pictures following it. (Report) Reply

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  • Edmund Strolis (12/13/2015 6:14:00 AM)


    Your poem starts in such a simple manner and opens up to such a grand and deep question. Beautiful heartfelt and personal words. Splendid (Report) Reply

  • (9/9/2015 10:15:00 AM)


    Little paradise a catchy place for childhood, shrine of virtues for adulthood and darkness swallowed for old age...great metaphors.......Your are a brilliant writer. Hats Off...10+++ (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/11/2015 6:05:00 AM)

    T U So so much..

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/9/2015 6:56:00 AM)


    Very heart touching... wonderful flow of emotion... thank you (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/11/2015 6:05:00 AM)

    T U so very much.....

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 9, 2015



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