M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,361 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Where Are You - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

I am stuck in butter
How to fly?
Her voice mesmerized me
I can't defy.
Her looks are stupendous
Eyes don't wink
Her melodious voice remains in
Keeping others at bay
Am I in dreams?
Or you are on sky?

Topic(s) of this poem: life, love

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Where Are You by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/18/2016 8:59:00 AM)

    Stuck in butter! ! Waiting for the heat of the sun. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Abderrahmane Dakir (1/11/2016 9:26:00 AM)

    Nice poem, Thank you for sharing this great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Nosheen Irfan (1/11/2016 7:21:00 AM)

    Wowww. That's a lovely poem on love. I like its unique style. Well done Asim.10 (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/10/2016 5:51:00 PM)

    How to fly is amazing and sticking to butter is interesting humorous. This is very finely expressed interesting poem shared with reality. A humorous poem on love is fantastic here.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 10, 2016

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