Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 48,706 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Where Their Commitment Has Been Devoted - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Proclaiming to be what one 'is',
For the benefit of listening ears...
At those social gatherings one attends.
And not making sacrifices toiling away,
Each day...
Applying a dedication to what it is 'they' say,
They do.
Is a trip done!
But not over any evidence that can be shown,
Where their commitment has been devoted.
People like this have more lip than show deed.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 22, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 22, 2011

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