Analice Javier


Whispers Of The Heart - Poem by Analice Javier

It started all as friendship,
I've never known will grown so deep;
Wondrin' myself I could hardly speak,
What causes me to smile before I sleep.

So I decided to ask my heart,
Who's keeping it alive and beat so fast;
And it answered, ' You're not that smart, '
He is that soul that lives from apart.

Now that I have you, and you have me,
Life becomes easy behind difficulty;
Distance will not be a hindrance to make it in reality,
For we know our love is beyond infinity.

So patience my King, patience my Queen,
These two lines often said in between;
We will make it work how long it may seem,
For it's our destiny that lies from within...

Form: Sonnet


Comments about Whispers Of The Heart by Analice Javier

  • Darkpoette - (5/11/2017 10:18:00 PM)


    good work, like this poem (Report) Reply

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  • Khairul Ahsan (11/1/2015 1:03:00 AM)


    A nice poem with a nice caption. Loved the way the poetess has seen the relationship growing and building.
    Nice work.
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  • Akintoye Temitayo (9/11/2015 5:04:00 AM)


    beautifully written...nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (9/4/2015 5:02:00 PM)


    We will make it work how long it may seem,
    For it's our destiny that lies from within... such a great conviction and courage is beautiful.
    i pray that your dreams be fulfilled. thank you
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    Analice Javier Analice Javier (9/9/2015 3:50:00 AM)

    Thank you very much Dr. Tony! I really never expect i will receiving such a good comment like yours.. God bless! ! !

  • Fabrizio Frosini (9/3/2015 10:28:00 AM)


    So I decided to ask my heart, / [..] / And it answered, 'You're not that smart' / He is that soul that lives from apart.

    Ho deciso allora di chiedere al mio cuore, / [..] / Che rispose: 'Non sei molto vispa', / Lui è quell'anima che vive in disparte.

    ''Non sei molto vispa'' is a Tuscan, more than a 'standard Italian', expression ;)
    ciao
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    Analice Javier Analice Javier (9/9/2015 3:55:00 AM)

    Honestly I don't understand Italian but still I am thankful for your comment.. God bless! ! !

    Analice Javier Analice Javier (9/9/2015 3:53:00 AM)

    Honestly I don't understand Italian but I am still thankful for your comment.. God bless!

  • Kelly Kurt (9/2/2015 11:16:00 AM)


    How relationships evolve is nicely presented here. Thanks Analice (Report) Reply

    Analice Javier Analice Javier (9/9/2015 3:57:00 AM)

    Thank you Miss Kelly! This is my first piece and I do appreciate your comment.. God bless!

  • Soul Watcher (9/2/2015 2:36:00 AM)


    Very nice, most of the relationships could start from unexpected things, then they start to go deeper as you said, and this is a great thing, I guess.
    Thanks for sharing your poem.
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    Analice Javier Analice Javier (9/9/2015 3:58:00 AM)

    Thank you also for your very inspiring message... Glad you liked it...

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 2, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 12, 2015


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