Whispers Of The Heart Poem by Analice Javier

Whispers Of The Heart

Rating: 3.8


It started all as friendship,
I've never known will grown so deep;
Wondrin' myself I could hardly speak,
What causes me to smile before I sleep.

So I decided to ask my heart,
Who's keeping it alive and beat so fast;
And it answered, ' You're not that smart, '
He is that soul that lives from apart.

Now that I have you, and you have me,
Life becomes easy behind difficulty;
Distance will not be a hindrance to make it in reality,
For we know our love is beyond infinity.

So patience my King, patience my Queen,
These two lines often said in between;
We will make it work how long it may seem,
For it's our destiny that lies from within...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 03 September 2015

So I decided to ask my heart, / [..] / And it answered, 'You're not that smart' / He is that soul that lives from apart. Ho deciso allora di chiedere al mio cuore, / [..] / Che rispose: 'Non sei molto vispa', / Lui è quell'anima che vive in disparte. ''Non sei molto vispa'' is a Tuscan, more than a 'standard Italian', expression ;) ciao

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Analice Javier 09 September 2015

Honestly I don't understand Italian but I am still thankful for your comment.. God bless!

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Analice Javier 09 September 2015

Honestly I don't understand Italian but still I am thankful for your comment.. God bless! ! !

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Kelly Kurt 02 September 2015

How relationships evolve is nicely presented here. Thanks Analice

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Robin Rambles On 22 June 2018

How I love your style of writing it give me hope thanks, when you have time check out my new ones thanks

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Darkpoette - 11 May 2017

good work, like this poem

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Khairul Ahsan 01 November 2015

A nice poem with a nice caption. Loved the way the poetess has seen the relationship growing and building. Nice work.

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Akintoye Temitayo 11 September 2015

beautifully written...nice poem

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 September 2015

We will make it work how long it may seem, For it's our destiny that lies from within... such a great conviction and courage is beautiful. i pray that your dreams be fulfilled. thank you

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Analice Javier 09 September 2015

Thank you very much Dr. Tony! I really never expect i will receiving such a good comment like yours.. God bless! ! !

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