White, Blue Poem by Kelly Vinal

White, Blue

Rating: 5.0


They tore their collars off,
The white and blue,
And marched in throngs on
Slick, wet cobbles, Main Street -
Us, me - them -
Days, years blended in
Dark chocolate, white cream
Revolution -
Yeah, who are we between
When power seeks itself
And the -less become more so -
Us v. them, you -
For like-, homogenous
Dreams, tongues - fears
Of white, of blue
Heaven, sky
Death and dirt.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rob Runnerstrom 24 December 2005

Insightful and extremly well thoughtout, Good show sir, good show.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 24 December 2005

Just when I thought I had seen some good stuff, here comes Kelly Vinal. Now there is a poet whose work I could read, no matter what the mood. Best wishes to you and keep safe Herbert

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Jeffrey Spahr-Summers 24 December 2005

Fantastic Kelly!

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Michael Shepherd 24 December 2005

I'd like to add my admiration for all that's here and all that's between the words.

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John Kay 24 December 2005

Kelly...fine poem. Very tight. Please stop by and see me when you're in town. Bldg 106. Merry Christmas.

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Allan James Saywell 24 December 2005

christmas allways brings the best out of poets for some strange reason but we dont mind, keep producing young man and i will keep reading have a great christmas with your family kelly warm regards allan

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Jerry Hughes 24 December 2005

Kelly, we had a poet in Australia who wrote delightfully in our vernacular. His name is C.J. Dennis: On reading your poem he'd have said, 'I dips me lid.' Meaning, I take my hat off to you. This is, as Herbert said, a great poem....

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Kelly Vinal

Kelly Vinal

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