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Together

Rating: 5.0

When I see the world, for you
When you became the world to me
A rainbow arched beyond the storms
To green pastures of destiny
Where our paths converge
As if God Himself determined
That this was the time
That we had walked enough alone
On those sad and winding roads
When I see the world, for you

By you, this is now a beautiful place
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Cecil (cj) Krieger 21 November 2006

Powerful, hopeful, wonderful... loved it Kelly Best... CJ

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Macaulay Akinbami 13 November 2006

What a wonderful collection of inpirational words. I love the lines. you are a rare gem.

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Akua Achampong 31 October 2006

this is such a good poem, i truely felt it as i read it, very powerful and touching!

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kAy BaRCeLon 29 October 2006

I just love this poem! Not only that I am a believer of destiny, I am also a fanatic of eternal love. Not only that you created an image of true and selfless love, you also showed that a man can be strong at the same time very romantic. Thank you for sharing such a very inspiring and uplifting poem.

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 23 October 2006

A wonderful write Kelly... inspiring!

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Heather Poynter 13 October 2006

i love all your work but this really shows a lot of love and faith. i love to see that in a person. please keep writing, i absolutely love reading your work.

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kAy BaRCeLon 06 October 2006

I see FAITH, hope, dreams... I also saw a romantic part of you... An inspiring read to start the morning with! ! ! Thanks,

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 05 October 2006

An absolutely beautiful love sonnet… a 10!

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Nimal Dunuhinga 04 October 2006

Well written Kelly! Togetherness on this journey And it's not so heavy hand-in-hand Walk towards the eternity with a singsong?

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Michael Gale 03 October 2006

The rainbow arched beyond the storm-Great poem, great line. Wow1 This rocks. Gave it a ten. God bless all poets-MJG.

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