Willow Poem by Kelly Vinal

Willow

Rating: 4.9


The beauty of a lonely willow
As summer shadows pass
To equinox
Leaves, low and delicate,
Reach for gently lapping waters
That tease her secrets
Secrets she will never say –
Oh those days of shade
As now the summer fades –
The beauty of a lonely willow
Is you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 07 September 2005

Beautiful poem.....I loved the picture of the willow reaching down.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 20 August 2006

A very beautiful portrait of a flexible soul; sad and nostalgic.

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Patricia Gale 20 August 2006

Beautiful, splendid imagery and it flowed so peacefuly.

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Simon Whild 13 November 2005

A lovely poem with a rich tapestry of description that puts you right in the spot. A definite oriental flavour that enhances the romanic natureof the poem. I loved this one.

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Allan James Saywell 07 September 2005

GREAT WRITE KELLY YOU ARE QUITE GOOD AT THE ROMANTICS KEEP UP THE GREAT POETRY REGARDS AJS

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David Gerardino 07 September 2005

GREAT POEM, I CAN SEE ALL YOUR WORDS...

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Kelly Vinal

Kelly Vinal

Homestead, Florida
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