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Rating: 4.4

Move away - from me, the form
Is parabolic in isolation, I’ll vet
The consequence and despair, despair
Will serve my hunger –
- Later -
And I’ll wait, wait for something,
Something greater -
Wait and I’ll wait
And I will have no pride -
The clouds will cast their twisted shadows

Over silver stallions that we ride.
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... Sheila 16 April 2007

I can feel the despair in this piece, yet a powerful resolve to overcome it! Wonderfully written. Blessings. Sheila

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That poem was really good, it made me think. Keep writing and keep cool, smiles N hugs, Willow: -)

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Maxim Muyu 21 August 2006

The poem is so metaphysical and deep, agains't all diabolic nature, indeed the poem can wash creation's by negation and despair.maxim muyu.

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Brenda Fischer 24 February 2005

I liked the last line best. It saved it.

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Lenchen Elf 05 December 2004

Very good indeed: -)

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Herbert Nehrlich1 03 December 2004

No doubt about it, you are good. H

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