Stevie Taite

Rookie - 318 Points (30th January 1973 / Kent, England)

White Triangle - Poem by Stevie Taite

White cotton triangle 
Placed on draped dress
 Over back  rest

Laying in wait
Imagine the form it fits upon
When the longing night is gone

Bathed in soothing warmth
Soft as petals of the rose
Think of this before eyes close.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

The lady is excited about meeting someone whom she has longed for for so long.... A long distance relationship, a military man, a husband who works away etc. If she could have sent it by phone, email etc she would have. The white cotton triangle is of course knickers/panties, his favourite style.

Comments about White Triangle by Stevie Taite

  • (12/3/2012 4:25:00 PM)

    Beautifuly simple and very evocative. (Report) Reply

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  • (9/29/2012 11:49:00 PM)

    imaginative and melodiousness...each word gentle and gorgeous
    i love should put it in front this is a great piece it must be appreciated
    thank you for sharing mam
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  • Kelvin Owusu (8/30/2012 4:30:00 AM)

    again well done good work inform when u post more up :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 29, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 30, 2012

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