! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Who Cries On Independence Day... Senryu Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Who Cries On Independence Day... Senryu

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Pray, why does it rain
On Independence Day? Hey-
Freedom fighters cry…

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Seema Aarella 15 August 2009

why do they cry? because of the state of present India...., because may be we failed to respect their effort and sacrifice, the lost values and dignity....the real meaning and sense of freedom is mistook and the people are drifting away from morals....may be! ! ! ! ! !

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Pandian Angelina 28 August 2009

Let their tears soak into our hearts Soften our differences and indifferences And give life to true patriotism in our lives! Angel

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premji premji 27 August 2009

tears of the gone seeing after the misuse of freedom...........

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Sandra Martyres 15 August 2009

The tears are justified Mamta.. a meaningful senryu...10

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Rakesh Bedi 15 August 2009

Mamta, i always thought that skies cry on this county's pathetic condition. It never occured to me otherwise. Thanks for wisening me up. I simply loved it, dear!

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 15 August 2009

the nature of indian politics reversed exact opposite after independence...indian freedom fight is one of the most amazing incidents in human history...after obtaining independence we too have become another country...the cry is justifiable

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