Who Is Better? Poem by Aftab Alam

Who Is Better?

Rating: 5.0


Should we become a blind, dumb and deaf?
Everything; Unseen, unuttered and unheard
This is the wonderful earth with the winking huff
Lo! Bullets are less effective than the stony word

You say, vacate the earth, Where Should we go?
Identities: should it be untraceable of my feet!
Walking on straight path with brook like flow
Not on right but on wrong, shouldn’t tongue twist?

Still we unknown to the self but highly born
Here we seek refuse to Him and seek His help
Character and self better than ours! Take a horn
And search, no where you will find, only you yelp!

Among us there are culprits with black spot
And they have gone away from the caravan
And fetched bad name for us, still they shot.
We are better than lovely heavenly angel.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is about the terrorism by the Muslims and those who made them terrorist merely to blame Islam and the true muslim..Islam is not for only Muslims It is has a universal call read the Quran and follow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 15 June 2013

very hard hitting and sharp.. full of emotion and gust..diction is excellent.... a cracking poem i like it 10

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Gajanan Mishra 15 June 2013

we are better than lovely heavenly angel, very fine thought really my dear poet, thanks.10 Please read my new poems and comment and vote.

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