A Drop Of Happiness Poem by Aftab Alam

A Drop Of Happiness

Rating: 4.4


From the grief ocean, I steal, a drop of happiness,
For every autumn, I get a lovely beautiful spring,
For human youth; the festive, to dance and sing,
We nature, within nature; keepeth blissful fitness,

When spring comes, nature with its beauty; greet,
Flower with hue sways and butterflies do flip flop,
Calm breeze's sensational blush; a birth of hope,
Seasons love, mingles with whole color, they meet.

Know, a place in mind, away from the physical spring,
Hatching spring and brooding youth forever, a bliss,
Grief of the world; dry petals, away from hate, I kiss,
From the grief ocean, a drop of happiness, they bring.

There will not be a spring without autumn; no taste,
If no sorrow, what taste happiness will provide, say?
If no youth, why then heart will throb; gaily and gay?
Autumn prepares to decorate the heart with haste..

Monday, October 7, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,grief,happiness,nature,ocean,seasons,spring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 07 October 2013

you must have put lot of energy in writing this poem... kudos to you...love it ''From the grief ocean, I steal a drop of happiness For every autumn I get a lovely beautiful spring For human youth; the festive, to dance and sing We nature within nature; keepeth blissful fitness''...........full 10..

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Farisa Haleel 09 November 2014

niceee!!! i steal a bit of pleasure from the poem..:)

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Roseann Shawiak 19 October 2014

From the grief ocean, I steal a drop of happiness. How clever you are to see and find a drop of happiness in the ocean of grief. I feel those drops may come from our memories of past good times. You steal a drop from yesterday in order to get through all the tomorrows yet to come. Brilliant and profound, Aftab. I give you a 10 for this one. Thank you for sharing and enlightening those in sorrow. RoseAnn

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Sallam Yassin 09 October 2013

very sensed that sweet touch of the art From the heart to heart touch! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Amitava Sur 26 October 2014

It feels really remarkable to know that you could steal a drop of happiness from within the ocean of grief. Loved it.

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Navod Dilhara 29 November 2019

Rhetorical questions emphasize quite lot of things. Nicely written.

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 02 August 2016

I liked it. it is so beautiful and descriptive..

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Souren Mondal 13 February 2016

[...] dry petals, away from hate, I kiss, From the grief ocean, a drop of happiness, they bring.[...] Such finely written lines.. A beautiful poem., thanks for sharing :)

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A very good nature-inspiring poem

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Seema Chowdhury 05 July 2015

Beautiful and inspiring, Lovely to read.

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