Who Will Go First Poem by me poet yeps poet

Who Will Go First

Rating: 3.5


Idealistic poetry
one will follow the other
the left behind one
may remarry
some for youth
to be continued
some for old age
just verbal company

but if both want to go
holding
hand in hand
then fetch
a Helicopter

give the suicide pilot
all your wealth
as soon as you die
some lonely farista
earthly god alone
will come
to hold broken hands
hand in hand entwined

so live as long
as you can
have buttered toast and jam
then one day 'twill become
a scam
no man
nor ma'am

HEY ALLAH
HEY RAM

Sunday, October 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: hubby,love,love and art,love and life,poetic expression,tribute,wife
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
kabhhheee bhee kya
aapney yeh sochaaa tha
ki eaisa bhee
ho sakta hai
hai Allah
Hare Rama
aour
hare Krishna
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 05 October 2020

RAM RAHIM ALLAH KHUDA BHAGABAN GOD ALL are believing thought Let your poem come out thru the spontaneous stream to write poem it's your style your form, rules you are not fool so, let it come let it bloom naturally

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Anjandev Roy 04 October 2020

so live as long And sing the glorious song.......beautiful.......thank u......anjandev roy.

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Varsha M 04 October 2020

Beautiful imagery poetry. Thank-you.

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