' Why My Room Can'T Be A Garden ' Poem by Riquetta Elliott
' Why My Room Can'T Be A Garden '
Why my bed can't be a
Laying green or red shape
Beauty?
Why my dressers can't be
A juiced red of health?
Why my desk can't be talled
Tree of oranged taste?
Why my floor can't be a
Splashed grape to swim or thirst?
Why my wall can't be stand of greens?
Why my room can't be a garden?
Why it can't be my nature?
Why it can't be my paradise?
Why it can't be my castle?
Why my room can't be a garden?
Why it can't be my nature?
Why it can't be my paradise?
Why it can't be my place or my privacy to be alone?
Why my room can't be a garden?
I ask tell why?
I think the garrden is in your mind growing every day adding colour here there and everywhereand flowing from your pen 10 Chris
When good musical poems bloom in the mind of RIQUETTA ELLIOT why should there be a garden away from her very self.Man`s reinvention of the missing charms in life will oneday bring forth the gardens and our springs will ever stay around. A poem quite alluring....and I am giving a 10 straightaway..
The questions that inspire a visual splash of colours and throw the mundane out of doors bold and strong personality stamped through this verse
Very poignant. In your mind, your room is a garden. Thank you for shaing your thoughts with the world. Warmest regards, Sandra
Sis you already know you the best! ! ! ! You are a garden fill with love and inspiration! ! !
Beautiful outpouring of heart. A very good poem. Keep it up. CP
YEAH THIS IS ANOTHER GREAT PIECE. LIKE THE WAY YOU LAID THIS 1 OUT
Naive desires given beautiful words... beautiful words and images depiciting the beautiy of heart mind and soul... Really good... Keep it up...
yer wanna know sumthin. yer hv to wait when the day comes and your mr.right is standing at your doorstep. evrything will change by then.nice write riquetta.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 12:01:14 AM # 1.0.0
some interesting images here! ! I never thought to compare my room to such things, but its pretty sweet that you came up with the 'fruit/veggie' garden idea...awesome job......