The one's I loved most
now discard me uttermost
Why did I place them under unrest
sad 'tis
I must now POEM HUNTER QUIT
More will feel the hurt
than me
the poet's will
may god bless him
I was onlyhis best seller of vision
If he condemns me
so be it
I knew 'twas coming
So a poet must bebold enough
to learn and know
the only way to reach salvation is
to ''let go''
let us not remain in cocoons alone
just to besingularly known
Make amends
and then you will only see
God's light spreads
through and through me
only a simple poet that I may be
o great poet don't abandon me
But your WILL prevails
GOD MUST HAVE SOUNDED THEE
may so it be
I shall still praise thee
O world class
Spiritualist
may alone be ye...
I will still BOW
to thee
JI
I'm happy Sir you didn't do this. Don't even think to quit hearts of the readers.never ever again. We live you, we love poetry of PPME YEPS THE POET OPTIMIST YOUTH FOR ALL AGES! ! !
Many times I had feelings that I should now quit PH but when I thought twice I decided to remain with PH. It's PH due to that I have so many good poetic friends all over the world. It's enough for me that I am known as a poet in all the leading countries of the world. So I advice you to think twice and to remain at PH.
Sir I too have friends about the world friends who love me like you so it is foolish of anyone to think of abandoning such a wonderful site as PH Thanks sir you give me the water to quench my thirst and hope all shall follow thee be friendly
Oh no...... .......! ! My mom wasn't at home.... So I was not having my tab....... Nothing is like that...... A wonderful write..... Rated 10.... Naila
Thnx NR I know u like my poetry this hurt was from some guy who is so self centred promoting a coterie not done in poetry glad u came by young lady/girl
Don't worry. Go on writing. People will talk. It is their job. If you quit you are fleeing from battle field. Don't do that succumbing to their pressure. Wish you best. You are one of the great and popular poets here. Keeping inking and posting.
Sir you bless my heart of PH i always shall remain a part poets of comfort thou all art
I knew 'twas coming So a poet must bebold enough to learn and know the only way to reach salvation is to ''let go'....Absolutely true my friend! Poem Hunter is a very good place where we find many good friends! You are an asset to this august forum my friend! Never think of quitting! (10)
When I have such great hands upon my shoulders am I going to be foolish enough to quit You all are my ears and eyes half deaf is me hopes you dole freely thanks all great poet friends of PM we will poeticise all togather and worlds love we all shall and will gather spread peace and harmony that alone is a charm for you and me hopefully I shall go full blast and up hold poem hunters mast you all alongside
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
continue writing and writing will strengthen our pen which is mightier than a sword- sp