I printed all my poems out and put them in a book.
I've placed it on the table in the hopes you'll take a look.
You know you'll find my soul there beneath the cover page.
You'll read about my pleasures, my heartaches and my rage.
I know you don't like poetry and this I understand
but how can you not want to peek into my ''wonderland''?
If you would take a minute and peruse a page or two
I think you'd be suprised to read the thoughts I have of you.
I've tried to make it easy and I know you see it there.
I'll wait it out and hope you see these things I need to share.
I suppose I know the answer is in where I place my book.
I'll put it in the bathroom......then you're sure to take a look!
Mary, this is fantastically written. The rhyme obviously brings great ring to the poem but you bring great humour to this poem which is brilliant. I would read your book any day!
MARY, IF YOU WONT TO KNOW ME READ THE POEMS, HOW TRUE...HOW REAL, PEAPLE WHO DONT READ POEMS, OR PLAY MUSIC, OR PAINT, HAVE A HARD TIME UNDERSTANDING YOUR POINT, BUT I DO..GREAT POEM.
opps..think my hubby is related to your significant other: P
Don't change a thing! Or else...I'll take it off my favorites list! ; -) Sincerely, R.
I, and my iTouch, are off to the bath-reading-room to peruse some more of your wondrous work! !
Wonderful poem, Mary. I like how the serious tone becomes unexpectantly humerous at the end... Well done! ! Brian
Good Mary and some interesting thoughts and ideas. Humour as well - I like it
It's funny that I'm going through the same thing. I placed my book on the table and now it's missing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Mary, how dare you write so naively, and so down-to-earthly, and then throw in a laugh, and bring all this off superbly! ... I'm awed.