Mary Nagy

Rookie (11-08-1970)

(00) The Place I Search For - Poem by Mary Nagy

To look
at your life
and not feel
you need.

To feel
complete.
Whole.
Content.

To have
reached
a place
where life
is enough.

To just
breathe
and be
thankful for the air.

That
is the place
I'm searching for.


Comments about (00) The Place I Search For by Mary Nagy

  • (10/16/2013 2:33:00 AM)


    Great poem, short and simple about what you're searching for in life. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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  • Andrew Blakemore (10/22/2008 6:13:00 PM)


    A lovely poem of longing, your words are so beautiful. Best wishes, Andrew (Report) Reply

  • (2/8/2008 1:33:00 AM)


    I think we are all searching. A nicely written, spare poem. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (11/2/2007 9:41:00 AM)


    yet unique repose in desire as poised by the glaze of mind, well penned, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • (5/26/2006 9:46:00 AM)


    Been there lots of times but can't seem to stay in that one place... Again, a perfect poem of simplicity which, of itself, is so beautiful. : ] (Report) Reply

  • (5/13/2006 4:03:00 AM)


    Wonderful yet simple thought's, Mary. Keep looking Mary and you will find your place in the people and things around you. Trust me I had to find it and did. Check me out at www.oxyjon.myby.co.uk

    Best wishes, John
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  • (5/12/2006 1:29:00 PM)


    Mary,
    Aren't we all really looking for that in life. Let us know if you find it.
    Hugs,
    Dee
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  • RAY LUCERO (5/12/2006 10:16:00 AM)


    Mary,

    If you can speak beautifully about 'that place', you know how to get there, because after all it's just a state of mind...right?

    You've got vision and soul...I enjoy your writing.

    Ray
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  • (5/12/2006 10:13:00 AM)


    Beautiful. I really makes you think about what you were thinking. You know?
    Nice work Mary!
    Sweetie Sarah
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  • Alice Vedral Rivera (5/12/2006 10:08:00 AM)


    Aren't we all searching for that place - I like this. It's different from your usual style.

    avr
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 12, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, May 12, 2006


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