Wide Away Poem by Amitava Sur

Wide Away

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If you sleep and then you dream
It’s very natural
And that is what you all do.

But if you dream that you sleep
It’s very alarming, what I do.
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Amitava Sur

Tuesday, September 17, 2013
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In a precise way the poet expresses the concern about the disturbed state of mind and alarming others too.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 02 August 2014

If it is day dreaming it means due to a worry you find it difficult to sleep and desire to sleep. If it was a dream during a sleep it might mean that you don't have peace of mind and you need it. In ny case it is a lovely short poem.

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Roseann Shawiak 22 March 2014

Interesting poem. Not too long ago I did have a dream that I was sleeping and then was awakened from my sleep for real. I woke up confused, thinking I was still sleeping, but I was awake. Crazy dream. Thank you, RoseAnn

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Patricia Grantham 23 September 2013

Very interesting poem. Just like a riddle. I had to think deeply on this one! I finally got the concept. Good one.

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Hazel Durham 20 September 2013

A nice quirky write, short but to the point!

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