Wild Romance Comments

i like this poem. i also like the rhyme :)

Excellet...! The rhyme is great.. tbh its an owsum one.. ;) keep it up.. (Y)

this is wonderful, i love the rhyme sceem, the metaphors and similies are very vivid, kep it up man

Alright! Expressive, I had to gasp :) Really enjoyed it A man expressing romance, really nice

Woah real wild eh! Electric currents of love do electric shock hee hee. Fun poem with an excellent flow.

rhyming sceme is praiseworthy.. enjoyed reading it

The sound effect makes it an enjoyable read! !

luvd reading it..! !

Loved it, with amazing lines, so original, inspired write! !

its something different and the words are excellent We are two birds that make a flock I am tick tock you are the clock On your heart's door I want to knock was superb »so close«

well done m8 nice rhyming