Inner Whispers

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! Will You...Hmn...Will You? - Poem by Inner Whispers

If I am there beside you, will you hold my hand,
kiss it with tender grace and with eyes that comprehend?
Will you touch my hair that fall on my cheeks
swept by air in perfume scent and fix?

Will you caress my lips with your finger tips
smoothen it as I blush in totally red?
Will you whisper words of love while your hands search my hips,
pulling me near you and hug me instead?

When heat mixed up and we feel the urging needs,
will you say, ' I want you, Honey, need you for keeps',
And expect a tender kiss from you,
while I tiptoe to be more closer to you?

Will you run your hands like I do
as we go naked, in love so true?
Will you make love with me
as we imagine how it would be?

Will you...hmn...will you?
After I answered your question of
'Will you marry me, Honey, hmn? '
by 'Yes, Honey, I will, I do! '?

Comments about ! Will You...Hmn...Will You? by Inner Whispers

  • Gerard Heijink (8/13/2009 4:39:00 PM)

    Oo Honey ko, Pakakasalan kita, ... Kailan tayo magpapakasal? (Report)Reply

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  • Ted M (8/13/2009 5:49:00 AM)

    Vow! the romance and the passion highlighted so nicely in the lovely choice of words. You make things sound so beautiful, whatever it is you want to say.
    Nice, creative and effective.....10+++

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  • ~*Nezra*~ Farrell (8/12/2009 8:40:00 PM)

    I really like the first line :)
    It reminds me and my baby!

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  • Graham Russell (8/12/2009 7:43:00 PM)

    such tenderness..
    such passion
    it makes me weep
    for loves caressing hand..

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  • Varanasi RamabrahmamVaranasi Ramabrahmam (8/12/2009 7:09:00 PM)

    A very sensitive poem expressed through romantic sensuality. Full of mood and 'thirst' for love. Nice poem (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 18, 2011

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