Winter Poem by Smoky Hoss

Winter

Rating: 5.0


The high-wires on telephone poles
are covered in sleepy snow;
the passing electricity
moves through them quietly and slow -

A bird upon a limb alone
sits motionless without a song;
awaiting just one more snowflake to fall
the last leaf reverently refuses to be gone -

Clouds above it all linger in a mist
as if the chilled breath of loves last kiss;
darkness, gazes down upon the earth
wrapped in a blanket of bitter coldness -

Natures annual treason
found in this the final season;
to glorify Spring
must be it's true purpose, and reason -

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Anderson 07 March 2013

What a great metaphor for winter-NATURES ANNUAL TREASON. A great summing up of winter. Come on, convert to rhyme, cause you are good at it

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Valerie Dohren 23 February 2013

Another great write Smoky, so descriptive of Winter - lovely.

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Heather Wilson 20 February 2013

An apt and beautiful description of Winter, Smoky, loved, Nature`s annual treason, let`s hope Spring will soon find its way here.

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Patti Masterman 18 February 2013

Yes; love your rhymin', Mr. Smoky Hoss ;)

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