Winter Coming Poem by Smoky Hoss

Winter Coming

Rating: 5.0


a smokestack behind
rows of trees
turning
with the crisp autumn breeze;
rising far above
the steam furled air
are colors of fall
showing they are going, somewhere -

a bird
on the wing
southbound...
in its backwards spring -

past clouds
building snow,
summer can't wait
it just has to go -

Venus dances in the west
Big-Dipper scoops the Milky-Way,
soon gray clouds will block them all
as night takes over day -

so very still is the silent
out-beyond
that freezes the soul
of the old fishing pond -

there's not a sound
nor even one birdsong
now that the warm wind of summer
is long gone;
with what is coming
and what has went
natures glorious bounty
is once again fully spent -

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Corpolongo 12 November 2013

I love Nature and Seasons and the beauty of it all. Wonderful descriptions and words here and felt.

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Lawerence Mize 12 November 2013

Wonderfully written poem Smoky.

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Lawerence Mize 12 November 2013

Wonderfully written poem on the changing of the seasons Smoky.

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Valerie Dohren 04 November 2013

Excellent Smoky, Winter is surely here now and your poem paints a beautiful picture do the season.

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Noreen Carden 04 November 2013

Hey Smoky a wonderful poem you paint a lovely picture of the departing season and the one coming into being Beautifully written well done

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