Wishing For You Comments
you seem so unsure,
don't know where to go.
you seem not at ease,
don't know who to please.
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A playful and inquisitive poem, enjoyed it very much! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
welcome. glad i've become a member in this org so whatever i have in my notebook, will be recorded here. it's another outlet for emotions and imaginations. :)
A well articulated piece of poetry, bristling with emotion and nicely penned from the heart. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
It's a nice poem, which will definitely look and sound nicer after the review work of those who commented is implemented. Thanks for sharing
Sounds sweet to read. Good work.... I guess you didn't see the type of your poem in the category..
P.S.2: you have labeled your poem a ''SONNET'' Form, but a sonnet has got a specific structure.. I can't see such a sonnet structure in your nice poem
i don't see a label that suits my work. all of my poems were structured that way. sorry.
nice and well penned write, Jannelle. Thanks for sharing P.S.1: there is a type here: I wants us to be friends.
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2/26/2026 10:13:56 PM # 1.0.0
I wants us to be friends. how I wish we could chat and amend. you seems fun to be with, and we could laugh 'til we run out of breath. very fine poem...... of desire and fun and enjoyment...... thank you.