With Sadness Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Sadness

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With sadness
Saturday,4th January 2020

Everything is said and done
nothing comes back after it is gone
whatever you earn as precious
doesn't remain in continuous possession

we are bound by human attachment
and that present
how vulnerable we are
and this exactly creates the fear

we feel obsessed
when dearly possessed
about the near ones
and feel sad when they suddenly gone

no words for departed mother
it offers us no replacement
it is saddest moment
when our face speaks and presents

daughter has more attachment
she has to pass through the unforgettable moment
look at the sky with helplessness
and feel it with sadness

Hasmukh Mehta

With Sadness
Saturday, January 4, 2020
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 January 2020

daughter has more attachment she has to pass through the unforgettable moment look at the sky with helplessness and feel it with sadness Hasmukh Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 January 2020

This piece deserves to be the poem of the day👌😊 Congrats on your featured poem....10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 January 2020

CONGRATULATIONS! CONGRATULATIONS! CONGRATULATIONS! Oh dear great poet of this site and great Indian poet. We always love to see you in top position and you are only the great one here who has existed for long time. An emotional poem is selected as the poem of the day.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 January 2020

Exactly everything is said at each moment. Once it goes it never comes back. Change acquires mind at each moment. We have to adjust with time newly and we have to sing continuously. An amazing poem is shared really.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 January 2020

Oh dear great poet., I love to red your beautiful poems and this poem too I love. Your tireless effort has taken you up and your perseverance is of high standard.

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Ha! HA! 21 January 2021

You lucked out old man. No more Treasure Island.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 January 2021

A poignant piece of poetry sir! Many congratulations! !

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M Asim Nehal 21 January 2021

Heartfelt poem. Congratulations

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Tulsi Shrestha 22 January 2020

Congratulations, revered Poetic Personality. You and your creations really deserve our respect and recognition

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Kevin Patrick 21 January 2020

our attachments create the fear, when the once so dear, will one day not be hear. The loss of a loved one is more painful then a limb, like a hidden heart that's gone. Magnificent poem Hasmukh the human condition well poised.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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