With You For Good Poem by Delicate Heart

With You For Good



My mistress's property expanded widely
Above the unknown space, earth vividly.
beyond the mountainous regions now.
Leaving me thus unique trauma, thou.
Abstract objects are my comfort when I dream.
Vibration is usual to all, but my heart's esteem.
Shiver affected by the felicity in the extreme.
Barren lands turned into paradise.
When her breath touched the ice.
What she has touched I can touch.
It is unfair for I crave too much.
To a wisp of her untouched hair.
I wish she wish me a little care.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jessica Dehn 11 July 2014

Well said. Very eluding in the meaning it could be taken a few ways. Good job.

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Tina Chrzczon 02 July 2009

well done :) its a very good poem.

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Howard Kern 01 July 2009

Good Job! Don't know what to think! It could be taken many different ways! It souds as if do not wish to live any more on this plain without her. Am I right? She don't care? Just tell me please?

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