Without You Poem by Crystle Jones

Without You

Rating: 4.3


When I look into your eyes,
I see my entire life.
I just donno what i would do,
If anything ever happened to you.
Your my reason, for getting up in the mornin',
My reason for breathin', my reason for livin'

When I see you smile, everything else just seems to fade.
I dont think i would last,
Even for just one day.
I would follow you, anywhere you go.
But this im sure, you already know.

Take my hand.
Take me with you.
Show me a place that, I never knew.
But please dont leave me, all alone.
I wont survive, on my own.
I need you standin, by my side.
Cuz without you here, i would die.

I love you.
I need you.
Dont make me live...
Without you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Hendrickson 16 July 2009

very nice. its from the heart so that makes it even better. it doesnt seem forced and its very smooth. nice work

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Subroto Chatterjee 16 July 2009

Either ways, you'll survive. You must. Cheers. Subroto

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Jahmari Thomas 16 July 2009

a very heartfelt poem that you have written.....please read one of my poems since i am a new writer...actually i jus wrote my first poem tonight...anyway beautifully written...yupperz

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Romeo Della Valle 24 July 2011

A heart touching love's confession honestly revealed to the World! I also like the flow in it. Keep inspiring the World with your talented works! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York! ...

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Nooruddeen Mm 10 October 2009

Cristle An Excellent love poem Beautifully narrated Good flow too. Congratulations Nooruddeen

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Angelic Warrior 04 September 2009

........speechless.....he is lucky to have such a loving woman by his side :) ......love it! 1000000000000000+++++++++: D

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Eyan Desir 22 July 2009

good write....top marks

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Sarwar Chowdhury 22 July 2009

Its an wow.....sweet poem.......words came out from heart's core! 10+

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