Wobble Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Wobble

Rating: 5.0


Bubbles of cloud are falling down,
Leathery wind is nibbling leaves,
Dark cloud is roaring far abode,
Jasmine plants are swinging in love.
Getting tender touch of raindrops,
Buds atop will bloom in love soon.

Wonderful wobble we see in cream,
Beam of creamy weather is nice veil,
Side to side unsteady movement,
We counter and encounter this day,
Trouble is not seen at all at time,
Calmness is swinging in nature's lap,
Pitter-patter raindrops dance in lane,
Wind is gobbling the wilted leaves,
As after long summer monsoon has come,
Weather is wobbling with wonder of hope.

Emotion of blooming is nobbled by breeze,
Double streams dobble and greenness giggles,
Weather hobbles as plants march in rain,
Cloud's love is falling down as tear of joy,
Rippling of water and leaves sing steadily,
Awkward sound does robble with green leaves,
Beauty of scene is robbling with us gently,
Still we notice cloud and plants wobble,
Monsoon weather is glorifying God's name,
Wonderful this cloud has wonderful wobble.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,14 July 2018. All rights reserved.

Wobble
Saturday, July 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: cloud,cloudy,nature,rain drops,weather
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Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,11 May 2018. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 14 July 2018

A fine write- - - - - -10

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Irfanulla Shariff 23 July 2018

Wonderful poem on Monsoon Weather. Striking imagery! 10+++

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Valsa George 21 July 2018

The land lying parched is bathed in the first rains of monsoon giving a new spurt of life to all vegetation! The atmosphere, though cloudy and hazy, is so very pleasant! You are able to see Gods mercy showering down in the falling rain! A great write!

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 July 2018

Yeah right- Monsoon weather is glorifying God's name, nice poem

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 July 2018

Another great piece of work that vividly portrays the wonders and beauty of nature. A well crafted write.10++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 July 2018

Bubbles of cloud are falling down, Leathery wind is nibbling leaves, Dark cloud is roaring far abode, Jasmine plants are swinging in love........beautiful words! An excellent poem! (10)

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Kumarmani Mahakul

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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