Wonderful Mist Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Wonderful Mist

Rating: 5.0


Increasing list of rays
Morning pours love
Palm full mind speaks
Gather hills of emotion
Walk and see far horizon.

Vision you spread in mist
To adore sun glows soon
Wonderful moment rises
Tale of life is written
Well serves water for year.

Service is life as we feel
Thrilling of theme you see
Morning has brought hopes
To shine life in far star.
In death and birth mist sees.

Sunday, September 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,morning,spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem has meaning of arrival of sun and light in misty day and speaks about life and death.Vision we spread and hopes we share matter a lot in this wonderful mist poem. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, india and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 27 September 2015

Beautiful diction.Morning rays bring love and hope.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 September 2015

Morning pours love when, one has a vision. Nice work.

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Pushpendra Patel 11 October 2020

Mist is very wonderful and when sun rays fall on these a nice beauty is created. I love such scene.

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Milan Panda 10 October 2020

When sunlight comes mist goes away. This is truly wonderful poem.

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Rajnish Manga 29 June 2016

You have exquisitely created the landscape enveloped in morning mist. More than that it brings to us the eternal philosophy of life and death. Loved reading it Thanks a lot. I quote: Vision you spread in mist / Morning pours love / Morning has brought hopes

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Rachel Butler 29 September 2015

A delightful tale of hope. RAB

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 September 2015

Morning brings life and hope rises again. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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