Obed dela Cruz

Rookie - 279 Points (October 18,1995 / Marikina City)

Write… But Erase Bad Lines - Poem by Obed dela Cruz

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Erasing bad lines from a written text
Is not that easy but it is the best.
Don’t consider it as a waste of ink
Because it shall improve the way you think.

Be humble to accept some corrections.
Do not goal perfection but perfections.
You can’t consider all outputs final.
Having no revisions is abnormal.

But don’t be discouraged to write something
Never let blank pages keep on waiting.
Everyday, there’s always something to write.
Thoughts come both in the day and in the night.

So write now and stopping should be never
But of course you should always remember
Erasing bad lines from a written text
Is not that easy but it is the best.

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Copyright © 2010 by Obed Dela Cruz

(February 6,2010; Marikina City)

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Comments about Write… But Erase Bad Lines by Obed dela Cruz

  • (6/30/2010 4:21:00 PM)

    Blank page is equal to blank mind…. thanks sharing…
    Ms. Nivedita

    PS Fill-up the blank...lol
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  • (2/12/2010 9:30:00 PM)

    Nice theme and beautifullly flown with a lovely content to ponder.10. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 5, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 24, 2010

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