Obed dela Cruz
Marikina City
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I Will Not Need To Cheat

Rating: 4.9
Revised with the help of Mr. Luke Easter:

I will not need to cheat on this or any test,
Very long hours of study to be by the best,
Many praise, encourage and show love to me,
Fulfilling desires through my dreams I see.

Freedom from sacrifice yes this work is hard,
Cannot give defeat a silent chance to bombard,
I will consider these choices my right of grace,
A means of worldly greatness adorns my face.
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Dr Antony Theodore 13 August 2018
A Pied Piper if you will, donned in holy array, By leading mediocrity of incompetence astray, Perfection is an art that many have lost in time, Yet we choose to move forward if only in mind...very nice and great poetry perfection, the desire not to mediocre in all that we do is the first step towards greatness.. thank u dear poet. tony
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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 24 November 2009
a WISE pen! strong messages Thanks For Sharing!
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Jester's P 23 October 2009
the poem is well written- measurement and rhythm is applied. and the message of the poem is of honesty and sincerity. keep it up my dear poet friend...the legacy of poetry is noble and ancient- the are gift of passion and devotion... all the best
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Melvin Banggollay 23 October 2009
Great write in form and structure with wisdom as placid as the future thanks for sharing
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Omar Ibrahim 22 October 2009
it is the best of yours i think......you are developing very fast.....waiting to see you a great poet in the future if you kept developing....write more obed...
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Nobody want to feel gulity. But you're right about having to have the wisdom in order to be free. Great poem!
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Joseph Poewhit 21 October 2009
You only cheat yourself, if you cheat on a test.
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Noel Horlanda 21 October 2009
a nice way to be honest, don't cheat on anything, honesty is the best policy so to speak. A wonderful write, impressed by your rhymes, strong, not forced. Excellent!
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Antonio Liao 20 October 2009
Congratulation! a natural wisdom imbued in your heart.....so real and life needs not but a person like you...God bless...a 10 +
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Ershad Mazumder 20 October 2009
Very good. I am inspired. I shall read more and more poems of you.
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