Writer's Cramp Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Writer's Cramp

Rating: 5.0


Not only the muscles of the hand
his heart too got cramps
and the writing paper refused,
pen has hidden somewhere.
Candle it burned to the last stage
wax like his tears
Grand father clock stopped.
A cicada's chirp the resemblance of his heartbeat.
His fiancee has eloped
with his best friend
and there is no way
to express his misery.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sourav Rc 02 August 2006

Oh! What a way to describe it! Nice poem!

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Nimal, exasperation and desparation and the seeming end of things masterfully expressed. Thank you for the piece, and for dedicating it to one who has felt such things. t xxxx

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Sandra Fowler 02 August 2006

What a beautiful poem..You gave yourself away in words without reservation. And the result is a very exceptional write. Warm regards, Sandra

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Linda Ori 02 August 2006

What a heartbreaking predicament! You write the feelings so well - nearly cried myself...........sad, and very well said. Linda

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David Tanguay 02 August 2006

Hey Nimal, that was great! Your getting better on writting poems. keep up the good work

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Duncan Wyllie 02 August 2006

I have not read poetry that expresses in this way before, I am sat back in amazement 10,10,10,10 across the board love duncan X

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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