Writing Poem by Indira Renganathan

Writing

Rating: 4.8


Word-lit dreams
Waxed colourful
Waning to a blank decline
Recuperate, wax again
Psychedelically perfuming
Metaphor, simile, metre
Rhetorically cut, collect syncopating
Yet blank decline once again
Unthematic, dissatisfactory
Seeking materials waxing the thickest
Nature, man-heterodox, orthodox
Stories, history
Domestic complexity, social perplexity
Repeating, repeating
Dreams-word-lit true

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahmad Shiddiqi 09 October 2008

gorgeous! keep writing! Dear, Indira. Could you read and comment on my latest poems such as Zenith, Gracious, Ode to Madhya Pradesh, Ode to Bhimbetka, and Manga? Thank you. Please, also read my revised version of Orchestra, which I added more words.

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Romeo Della Valle 05 July 2009

Writing to me is like drying the tears I constantly dropp either from love or pain for a lost-love... to me drowning in a valley of tears Is my life manifesting itself at this time... Great piece of work, , , , Romeo

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rago rago 10 May 2009

writing is the only way we can express.......that not only depicts inner thoughts but bringout bravery, passion and love to others in a clear picture.....a beautiful write.......you vision is nice....the last lines clearly speaks.....

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' Word-lit dreams ' What in case, the dreams are DISSOLVED! With the vibrations of the WORD- Like in the Beeja - Mantra........ Is lit with the LIGHT WITHIN.......... And everything else comes to STILNESS..............! -Thanbi.shree

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Jt Jayasingh 24 March 2009

A perfect play of words. But I had to seek the aid of dictionary. well done

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rohit sapra 05 February 2009

This poem is really very nice. Reflects a unique style of writing.

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